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Tuesday, February 10, 2009

A Recipe for World War II

- 2 cups of the failure of Treaty of Versailles
- 6 cups of Fascism
- 1 tablespoon the League of Nations
- 4 cups of Hitler
- 1 sliced Rhineland or Czechoslovakia
- 2 fresh invasions from Japan
- 5 teaspoons of appeasement
- 2 heaps of hatred
- 2 teaspoons of power
- Bowl of revenge
- 1 cup of declaring war

Method:
Preheat the oven to very slow 150°C.
In a bowl of revenge, carefully pour 4 cups of Hitler, and stir till they combine.
Once blended, sprinkle 2 teaspoons of power and spread evenly among the bowl.
In a separate bowl, beat together the failed treaty of Versailles, and the powerless league of nations.
Leave to stand for 15 minutes.
Add Fascism and appeasement gradually, one at a time, beating constantly until the mixture is thick of Hitler.
Slice Rhineland or Czechoslovakia and add to the mixture.
Sprinkle 2 heaps of hatred across the top.
Pour both bowls into a brushed oven tray with melted hope.
Add 2 fresh invasions from Japan.
Shape level of declaring war into a ball and flatten completely.
Place it on top of the mixture and bake until it turns crisp and dull.
You now have your recipe to World War II.

1 comments:

kirenjot said...

Niki,

I really liked your poem a lot and how you used specific details such as, 2 fresh invasions from Japan. I think you should add more figurative language such as instead of, "1 cup of declaring war," change it to a more metaphorical phrase. In the method part, I love how you write, "in the bowl of revenge," it really adds a great effect to your poem. But, I think that your directions are a complete copy of your ingredients; try to change the words around to make it more interesting.

Overall, you did a great job on your recipe poem!!!